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Band 6+: Describe an advertisement with a famous person in it. You should say: Who the person is Where you can see the advertisement What the advertisement is about • And explain how you feel about the advertisement

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One time when I was scrolling on my phone in my free time, I saw an ad in which Amitabh Bachchan was giving information about a polio drop to the citizens. In this ad, Amitabh Bachchan was urging people to take the polio drop for their children below 5 years old. Polio can make children disabled for life, but by taking the polio drop, it can protect them. In this ad, Amitabh Bachchan made a great impression on people because he is a favorite of all the people in the world and everybody listens to him. I admire this ad because firstly, it doesn't promote any wrong product, while it explains the benefits of the polio drop. After taking the polio drop, India was declared polio-free in 2014.

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One time when I was scrolling on my phone in my free time, I saw an ad in which Amitabh Bachchan was giving the information of a polio drop to the citizen. In this ad, Amitabh Bachchan was wearing the people to take the polydope to their children below 5 years old. Polyo can make the children disabled for lifetime but by taking polydope it can protect them. In this ad Amitabh Bachchan was Abundabh Bachchan made a great impression on the people because it’s a favorite of all the people in the world and everybody listened to him. I admire this ad because firstly it doesn’t promote any wrong product while it explains the benefits of the polyotrop after taking the polyotrop 2014 indiagostic layer as a polyofree.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

polio: 6

drop: 5

amitabh: 3

bachchan: 3

this: 3

people: 3

children: 2

taking: 2

because: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer stays on topic and addresses all parts of the prompt, including who the person is, where the advertisement can be seen, what it is about, and the candidate's feelings. The response is well-developed with specific details, such as the purpose of the advertisement and its impact on India being declared polio-free. To improve, consider elaborating more on where exactly the advertisement was seen (e.g., specific platform or context) and providing a slightly deeper explanation of personal feelings or reactions to the advertisement.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and follows a logical structure, addressing the main points of the topic. However, there are some instances of repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'Amitabh Bachchan was Abundabh Bachchan'), which disrupt fluency. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and avoid repeating phrases. Use cohesive devices like 'for example' or 'in addition' to link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and contains errors (e.g., 'wearing the people' instead of 'urging the people', 'polydope' instead of 'polio drop', 'polyotrop' and 'polyofree'). There is limited range and precision. To improve, learn and practice topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'public service announcement', 'campaign', 'eradicate') and use more descriptive language to express feelings about the advertisement. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('was wearing' instead of 'was urging'), missing articles ('a favorite of all the people'), and unclear sentence structures ('after taking the polyotrop 2014 indiagostic layer as a polyofree'). The refined answer shows the correct version. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and constructing clear, complete sentences. Practice using a mix of simple and complex structures.

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