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Band 5+: Describe family member who you want to work with

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Now I would like to talk about a family member I want to work with. Most of my family members work in San Veia, but in the future, I would like to work with my father because he has been a huge influence on me and his decision to pursue a career in building. I have always admired his passion for planning and his ability to understand complex concepts in a simple way. If we work together, we would make a great team because my father is a very good builder, and I bring new construction tools. I would like to work with him to build equipment for construction. I build related galleries, so we understand each other well. Therefore, I want to work with my father.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Now I would want to say about my family member I want to work with. Almost my family member work in San Veia, but in the future I would jobs with my father because he has been a huge influence on me and his decision to pursue a carrier in building. But he always admired his passion for planners, understand complex concepts in a simple and I end these days. And if we operate together we make a great team because my father is very good builder and to me I bring new constructs tools and I would like to work with him. And I build equipment for building. I build a gallery related so we understand each other. So I work together and nowadays therefore I want to work with my father.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

work: 6

would: 4

with: 4

like: 3

father: 3

family: 2

because: 2

understand: 2

construction: 2

build: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response is a good start, fulfilling the basic requirements of the task. However, to improve, consider elaborating on specific instances showcasing your father's influence and your shared skills. Adding more details about your collaborative projects and the types of equipment you envision building would strengthen the response and make it more engaging.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some noticeable hesitations and repetitions. Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and reducing instances like "And if we operate together we make a great team." Consider practicing speaking more spontaneously and connecting ideas more naturally. The conclusion feels a bit abrupt.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "constructs" and "galleries" seem slightly out of place in the context of construction. Expanding your vocabulary related to construction and business would enhance your score. Consider using more precise and descriptive language. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and sentence structures. For example, "I end these days" is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving accuracy in verb tenses and sentence construction. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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