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Band 4+: Describe someone (a famous person) that is a role model for young people. You should say: - Who he/she is - How you knew him/her - What he/she has done - And explain why he/she can be a role model for young people

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Well, I know many popular people who are ideal role models, but today, I am going to talk about a special individual, Indian cricketer, MS Dhoni. I became familiar with him through his cricket career. He has achieved great success in cricket, leading the Indian team to victory in various tournaments like the ICC Cricket World Cup. MS Dhoni can be a role model for young people because of his leadership skills, determination, and humble attitude both on and off the field.

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