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Band 4+: Describe someone (a famous person) that is a role model for young people. You should say: - Who he/she is - How you knew him/her - What he/she has done - And explain why he/she can be a role model for young people

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I know many famous sports persons and athletes, but today, I'm going to talk about an Indian athlete who became famous four years back. His name is Neeraj Chopra. Even the sole gold medal for India in the Tokyo Olympics 2020 caught my attention, and nearly all the Indian news channels focused on him after his feat. That's how I came to know about him. I learned about the struggles he faced, and how he could have given up, but instead, he persevered and performed well, sending a narrow message to perform well this time.

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I know many famous sports persons and athletes, uh, but today, I’m going to talk about an Indian athlete who became famous 4 years back. His name is Neer Chopra. Even the sole gold medal for India in the Tokyo Olympics 2020 in the nearly all the Indian news channels focused on him after his feet. That’s how I came to know about him. I learned about the struggles. If he is still, you know, uh, he could have scored the middle then as well. However, the narrow message information to perform well this time. I

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Task Response

4.5

The student attempts to describe Neeraj Chopra, an Indian athlete, as a role model for young people. However, the response lacks coherence and clarity, and the student fails to fully explain why Neeraj Chopra can be a role model. To improve, the student should focus on providing more specific details about Neeraj Chopra's achievements and how they inspire young people. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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3.5

The student's speech is hesitant and lacks fluency, with noticeable pauses and filler words (e.g., 'uh'). The response is also disjointed, making it difficult to follow. To improve, the student should practice speaking more smoothly and using cohesive devices to link ideas together.

Lexical Resource

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The student uses some basic vocabulary (e.g., 'famous', 'athlete', 'struggles'), but the range is limited, and there is little evidence of more precise or nuanced language. To improve, the student should learn and use more varied and accurate vocabulary to describe complex ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The student's grammar is mostly simple and lacks variety, with some errors in verb tense and sentence structure. To improve, the student should practice using a range of sentence structures and verb tenses accurately and appropriately.

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