Band 4+: describe something you don't have now but would really like to own in the future. you should say : what this thing is how long you have wanted to own it where you first saw it and explain why you would like to own it

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

The response is brief and lacks detail. Consider expanding on the description of the house, where you saw it, and elaborating on the reasons why you want to own it. More descriptive language would improve the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks coherence. The structure is weak; the response jumps between ideas without clear transitions. Work on organizing your thoughts and using linking words to improve the flow. Practice speaking more fluently and reducing hesitations like "There are a lot of things now I don't have anything now".

Vocabulary is basic. While understandable, more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the response. Try using more descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the house and your desire to own it. For example, instead of "beautiful house," describe specific features like "a charming Victorian house with a large garden".

Grammar contains errors. The sentence "Two years ago I watched the beautiful house and I want to buy this house and I was trying to buy this house" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on improving sentence structure and tense consistency. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more accurately and naturally.