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Band 5+: Describe the person who contributes to the society.

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I would like to describe my best friend who has contributed a lot to society. Who is Donior? We learned English together in a graduation course, and he is such a smart boy. I respect him because he never judged me and always answered me when I asked for help. Nowadays, he is working as a teacher because he scored 7 on the IELTS, and he has over 50 students whom he loves and respects. They are the first group of my friends, and they are very clever because my friend has the ability to teach. I would like to be his friend for the rest of my life because he is a good friend to me.

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I would like to describe my best friend who contributed to the society a lot. Who is Donior? We learned English together from graduation course and he is so smart boy and I respect him because he never judged me and he never answered me when I asked something for help. Nowadays he is working as a teacher because he got 7 score from IELTS and nowadays he has over 50 students that he loves and he respects because they are the first group of my friends and they are so clever because my friend has the ability of teaching. I would like to be a friend of him till the end of my life because he is good friend for me.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

friend: 4

because: 4

would: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is quite short and focuses more on the speaker's personal relationship with the individual rather than the person's contribution to society. To improve, provide more details about the teacher's contributions, such as specific teaching methods, community involvement, or the impact on students' lives. More specific examples of how the teacher helps students would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There are some instances of unclear phrasing and slightly rambling sentences. Focus on creating a clearer narrative structure with a strong introduction, body, and conclusion. Practice using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of simply stating facts, explain *how* your friend's actions contribute to society.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. While the speaker uses words like 'contributed,' 'respect,' and 'clever,' more sophisticated synonyms and descriptive language would elevate the response. Try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to teaching and societal contribution. For example, instead of 'smart boy,' use more descriptive terms like 'intellectually gifted' or 'highly intelligent.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect word order, tense inconsistencies, and article usage. While the message is generally clear, improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage (a, an, the), and correct tense usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences, to demonstrate grammatical control.

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