Band 5+: Describe when someone gave you something you really wanted /a gift your received - Who gave it to you - What was the thing - When you received it - Why you needed it? - How you felt about it

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is a weak attempt at answering the question. It mentions receiving gifts but doesn't describe a specific instance, failing to address most aspects of the prompt. Focus on fully answering all parts of the question with specific details and examples to improve.

The answer is understandable but lacks coherence. The structure is weak; it doesn't follow the question's structure. The speaker needs to improve their ability to organize their thoughts and present them in a logical sequence. Adding transitional words and phrases would improve fluency.

The vocabulary is basic. While understandable, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the response. The phrase 'Dhani life' is unclear and needs replacement with a more appropriate term. The speaker should aim for a wider range of vocabulary to express their ideas more effectively.

The grammar contains some errors, particularly in tense consistency. The speaker needs to improve their accuracy in using past tenses. While the basic sentence structures are correct, more complex grammatical structures would improve the overall score. The sentence 'I have visited him and I have said to him that I have made something' is grammatically correct but awkwardly phrased and lacks context.