Band 6+: desribe a person you know has chosen a career in the medical field

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

This is a good start. To improve, expand on your description of Dr. Sharma. Describe her personality, her work ethic, and perhaps a specific example of how she helps people. Adding details will make your response more engaging and complete.

The initial repetition of "Hello" detracts from fluency. While the main idea is clear, the sentence structure could be improved for better coherence. Adding a brief concluding sentence would enhance the overall flow.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Using "paternal aunt" is precise. However, more descriptive language could be used to paint a richer picture of Dr. Sharma and her work. The word "kid" is inappropriate and should be removed.

There are grammatical errors, particularly the incomplete sentence structure and the inappropriate use of "kid." While the basic grammar is understandable, more complex sentence structures and accurate grammar would improve the score. Consider using articles and prepositions more accurately.