Band 6+: Did you have any childhood dream about your future career?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear answer. However, it could be improved by elaborating on the reasons behind the childhood dream and providing more specific details about the aspirations. Consider adding examples or anecdotes to illustrate the points made.

The answer is understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ("uh", "It was a. It is a"). Smoother delivery and more confident phrasing would improve fluency. The structure is somewhat disorganized; a clearer, more linear progression of ideas would enhance coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Phrases like "joined with a work" are not quite accurate. Using more sophisticated synonyms and precise word choices would improve the lexical resource score. The word "inspire" is used in a slightly unusual way. Consider using a more precise word like "inspired by" or "fascinated by".

There are several grammatical errors. For example, "I always inspire with business" is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is often simple and repetitive. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve this aspect of the response.