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Band 5+: discribe about a horses?

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If I describe horses, they are very beautiful animals in the world. Horses are divided into three groups: wild animals, sea animals, and domestic animals. Horses can be categorized into two groups: pony horses and larger horses. Horses are indeed beautiful creatures. However, the Kupkar horses are particularly beautiful to me. My favorite horses are Elorov. The Kupkar horses are very beautiful, and my favorites, even though the particular horse is very beautiful, include both small and large horses. Horse meat is very tasty, and horses help with cooking and other tasks. Pony horses assist in parks and help children and others. I know horses are my favorite animals; that's why my favorite animal is horses, and I like them. Horses are truly beautiful animals in the world.

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If I describe about horses, the horses are very beautiful animals in the world. The horses are animals divided into three groups. There are wild animals, sea animals, domestic animals and others. The horses are divided into two groups. They are pony horses and cooker horses. The horses are very beautiful horses. But the Kupkar horses are very beautiful horses for me. And my favorite horses are Elorov. But the Kupkar horses are very beautiful. And my favorite horses for me, even though the particular the horse is very beautiful and small and big horses. In horses, meat is very taste and the horses’ It is very test and the horses helps are the cook and others and pony horses are the They help in parks and they help the children and others. I know the horses are my favorite animals, especially, especially that’s why my favorite animal is horses and I like the horses. The horses are very beautiful animals in the world.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

horses: 15

beautiful: 6

animals: 5

very: 4

favorite: 3

world: 2

groups:: 2

kupkar: 2

horse: 2

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