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Band 5+: Do you agree fashion companies should pay factory workers more money

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Polished transcript:

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I agree that if this fashion company's job is often dangerous and difficult, then they must pay a lot of money. The workers and I really value their contributions. Therefore, they risk their lives to do this job properly.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I agree that if this fashion company’s job is often dangerous and difficult, then they must pay a lot of money, a lot of money, then the admirer and me really save companions. Therefore, they risk their lives to do this job right.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and expresses a clear opinion. However, it could benefit from further development and a more nuanced discussion of the economic and ethical considerations involved in fair wages for factory workers in the fashion industry. Consider exploring the complexities of the issue, such as the impact on pricing and consumer behavior.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There is some repetition ("a lot of money") and the connection between paying workers more and saving companions is unclear. Improving sentence structure and reducing repetition will enhance fluency and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not sophisticated. Words like "admirer" and "companions" are used inappropriately. Using more precise vocabulary related to fair wages and worker rights would improve the score. Consider using words like 'employees', 'compensation', 'exploitation', etc.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains errors. The sentence structure is somewhat awkward and there are issues with subject-verb agreement and word choice. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and using a wider range of grammatical structures will improve the score. For example, the phrase 'they risk their lives to do this job right' could be improved to 'they risk their lives performing this dangerous work'.

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Do you agree fashion companies should pay factory workers more money

I agree if this fashion company is their job is often dangerous and difficult then they must pay a lot of more than the ordinarily safe companies. Therefore, they risk their lives to do this job right.

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