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Band 6+: Do you agree or disagree that many young people today want to be famous?

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Yes, I strongly agree with this phenomenon because most people want to be famous in my country. First of all, I would say that in this modern era, there is a significant number of people creating videos online solely to become famous. Being famous is a very convenient option for anyone. They are trying to become famous in other countries as well. It has a considerable impact on the present moment and on social and economic factors. For example, a report published by the Daily Star stated that more than 80% of people create videos online solely to become famous.

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Yes, I strongly agree with this phenomenon because most of the people want to be famous in my country. And first of all I would say in this modern era, there are a significant number of people creating videos online for only for want to be famous. Famous thing is very convenient option for any people. They are trying to famous in other people or other countries. It has considerable impact on the present moment and social and economic factors. For example, a report published by the Daily Star stated that more than 80% of people create video online for only for famous.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

famous: 5

people: 3

become: 3

videos: 2

online: 2

solely: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response shows some understanding of the question and attempts to provide reasons. However, the answer is quite general and lacks specific examples or detailed explanation. Consider providing more specific examples and elaborating on the reasons behind the desire for fame among young people. Avoid making sweeping generalizations about an entire country or population. Focus on providing well-supported arguments rather than relying on a single statistic from an unspecified source.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There is some repetition and self-correction. Try to plan your response briefly before speaking to improve the flow and reduce hesitations. For example, instead of saying "famous thing is very convenient option", rephrase it as "Fame is a convenient option." This will sound more natural.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but some phrases could be more precise and natural. The repeated use of "famous" could be varied. Instead of "trying to famous," use "trying to become famous." Consider using synonyms for "famous" such as "well-known," "renowned," or "celebrated" to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in the use of articles and prepositions. For example, "a significant number of people creating videos online for only for want to be famous" should be "a significant number of people creating videos online solely to become famous." Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and preposition usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences, to improve accuracy and range.

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