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Band 6+: Do you agree that fashion companies should pay factory workers more money?

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Yes, I particularly agree. If a company can improve even with high salaries, then they should pay more. On the other hand, if a company or committee gives more money than needed, its factory can become bankrupt. I think payment should be connected with a company's status; for instance, factories as a deal reward more money than other local companies.

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Yes, I particularly agree. If a company can improve even with high salaries, so they should pay more. In other hand, if a company or committee gives more money than in need, its factory becomes bankrupt. I think payment to focus connected with companies status, for instance, factories as a deal, reward more money than other local companies.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

more: 3

company: 2

should: 2

other: 2

money: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and presents a nuanced perspective by acknowledging both the ethical and economic considerations. However, the response could benefit from more detailed explanation and examples to support the arguments. Consider exploring the broader societal impact of fair wages and the potential for increased productivity and brand loyalty resulting from better worker compensation.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor issues with phrasing ('In other hand' instead of 'On the other hand') and a slightly abrupt transition between ideas could be improved with smoother connectors and more sophisticated sentence structures. Consider using more sophisticated transition words to link your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. While the speaker uses words like 'particularly' and 'bankrupt,' more precise and nuanced vocabulary could elevate the response. Consider using synonyms for 'money' and 'pay' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors ('In other hand,' 'payment to focus connected'). The sentence structures are relatively simple. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage.

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