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Part 3

Band 6+: Do you agree that sports stars earn too much money?( topic7)

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In my opinion, it also depends on many factors. If you have enough talent and know how to seize opportunities, you can become a sports star and earn a lot of money from sports and advertising contracts. Nowadays, many famous sports figures have done this and they are really successful, so I think sports stars earn too much.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

In my opinion, it also depends on many factors. If you have enough talent and you know how to keep the opportunities, you are about to become a sports star and earn too much money from sports and advertising contacts. Like, in nowadays, many famous sports people did it and they really success so that I think sports star.

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Overall Band Score

6
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
sports: 4
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Pronunciation

6
Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

6
The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks a comprehensive discussion of the issue. Consider exploring both sides of the argument more fully, providing a balanced perspective and supporting your claims with more specific examples. A more developed conclusion would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

6
The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some hesitancy and repetition ("too much money"). A clearer structure with a more definite conclusion would improve fluency and coherence. Consider using transition words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

6
Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. Words like "seize opportunities" could replace "keep the opportunities." More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
There are grammatical errors, such as the incomplete sentence ending with "I think sports star." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly improve the score.

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