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Band 6+: Do you allocate a certain amount of money for the Shopping.

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Yes, definitely. Since I enjoy shopping, I save money from gifts I receive from friends, family, and relatives. I usually go to the Bhat Bhateni shop to buy clothes and groceries. I spent around 2000 Nepali rupees on one visit. I also have a system for saving money and earning money for my own shopping. So, nowadays I use my own money for shopping.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Yes, definitely. As I am keen of shopping, I collected money which I get from my friends, family members and relatives. I mostly go to the bhat button shop for buying close this item as well as the grocery item I spent around nepali currency 2000 when I once visited this stuff. So yeah, I have uh, a developer of saving the money as well as making money for my own shopping. So nowadays I’m spending my own money for the shopping purposes.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

money: 4

shopping: 3

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question, but it lacks a clear statement about allocating a specific amount of money. The student mentions saving money and spending their own money, but doesn't explicitly state a budget. The answer could be improved by directly addressing the question with a clear statement about budgeting for shopping.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some instances of repetition and filler words (e.g., "uh", "so yeah"). The student could improve fluency by using more concise language and avoiding unnecessary repetition.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used with complete accuracy (e.g., "keen of shopping" instead of "keen on shopping"). The student could improve their lexical resource by using more precise and idiomatic expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains some grammatical errors, such as the use of "close this item" instead of "clothes" and the incorrect use of "developer" instead of "system". The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying more attention to subject-verb agreement and using correct prepositions.

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