Band 6+: Do you enjoy cooking? What is your favorite dish to make?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant and provides a clear answer to the question. To improve, consider adding more descriptive details about the apple pie, such as the ingredients or the cooking process. Expanding on why it became a favorite could also enhance the answer.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and awkward phrasing that affect the flow. For example, the sentence 'First of all I did it to my classmates so they like it' is not very clear. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking and use simpler sentence structures to improve coherence.

The vocabulary is quite basic and repetitive ('pie,' 'favorite'). Try to use more varied and descriptive language to express your preferences. For example, instead of just saying 'they like it,' you could say 'they enjoyed it' or 'they appreciated it.' Expand your vocabulary related to food and cooking. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors in the response. 'I started to choose this pie' is an odd construction; 'I started making this pie' would be better. 'I love to do this by it's my favorite' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Practice forming simple sentences accurately before attempting more complex ones.