Band 7+: Do you ever save money to buy special things

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question with a clear example. Consider expanding on the saving process itself - how you save, what strategies you use, or any challenges you face. This would add depth and further demonstrate your fluency.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition ('so') which could be reduced for improved fluency. The structure is clear and easy to follow. Minor improvements in sentence structure would elevate the fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrasing 'BTS boy brand' is slightly inaccurate; 'BTS boy band' would be more precise. More varied vocabulary could be used to describe saving money (e.g., 'putting aside money', 'setting aside funds').

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'And because their album is so expensive for a student like me, so I have to save money for a long time to have enough money to pay their album' is slightly awkward and contains unnecessary repetition. More complex grammatical structures could be used to improve the score.