Band 5+: Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides specific examples to support the claim, which shows good development. The response covers multiple family members, adding depth to the answer. To improve, ensure that the vocabulary used is precise; for instance, the phrase 'play chase' is typically used for young children, and 'step up' may not be the intended term for a family member (perhaps 'step-sibling' was intended). Refining these word choices would enhance the naturalness and accuracy of the response.

The speaker attempts to list several points, but the coherence is hindered by a lack of logical connectors and a repetitive sentence structure. The use of 'and' to link almost every clause creates a 'run-on' effect, which is characteristic of a lower band score. To improve, use a variety of cohesive devices such as 'In addition,' 'Moreover,' or 'On the other hand' to separate different ideas rather than relying on 'and'.

There is some good use of idiomatic expressions like 'keen on' and 'passionate about.' However, there are significant errors in word choice and collocation that impede meaning. For example, 'it is familiar with my mother and sister copies' is nonsensical in English, and 'play in chase' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse of 'play chess' or 'play chase.' You should focus on learning collocations (words that naturally go together) to avoid these awkward phrasing errors.

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors that make the response difficult to follow. The phrase 'it is familiar with my mother and sister copies' shows a lack of control over relative clauses and possessives. Additionally, the final clause 'it is family way to my little step up' is grammatically incomplete and unclear. To reach a higher band, you need to practice using complex sentence structures (like relative clauses: 'which is a hobby my mother also shares') accurately.