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Band 7+: do you like crowded places hơ do you feel ưhen you are in a crowded place

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Not at all. Crowded places make me feel sick. I can't stand being in places with a lot of people. That is seriously draining.

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Not at all. Places that are crowded make me feel sick. I can’t stand places where it have to be with a lot of people. That is seriously draining.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is clear and directly addresses the question. It provides a definite opinion and offers a reason for that opinion. To improve, consider adding more detail or examples to further illustrate why crowded places are draining for you.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally fluent and coherent, with a clear expression of dislike for crowded places. The response could be improved by using more varied cohesive devices to link the sentences together more smoothly. For example, you could add a phrase like 'In fact' or 'This is because' to provide a stronger connection between the sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and conveys the meaning effectively. The phrase 'seriously draining' is a good choice. To enhance the lexical resource, consider using synonyms or more descriptive words to express your feelings about crowded places. For example, instead of 'make me feel sick,' you could say 'make me feel overwhelmed' or 'claustrophobic.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors in the response. Specifically, 'where it have to be' should be 'where I have to be' or 'where there are.' Correcting these errors and focusing on accurate sentence construction will improve the grammatical score. Also, 'I can't stand places where it have to be with a lot of people' could be rephrased as 'I can't stand being in places with a lot of people.'

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