Band 6+: Do you prefer spending time with family or friends?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite brief and lacks detailed explanation. Consider elaborating on specific examples of enjoyable activities with family and friends to better illustrate your preferences and reasons. Developing your response with more specific examples will strengthen your answer.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The phrasing 'on the one hand...on the other hand' is good, but the connection between the two halves isn't as smooth as it could be. Try to create a more logical flow between your points. Avoid phrases like 'It is very terrible and fun' - this is contradictory. Instead, focus on expressing your feelings more clearly and concisely.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like 'terrible' are not the best choice here. Try to use more specific and descriptive language to express your feelings about spending time with family and friends. Consider using synonyms for 'close' to show a wider range of vocabulary.

There are some grammatical errors. 'On the one hand...on the other hand' is used incorrectly. The sentence 'Both of them are closely to me' is grammatically incorrect. Work on sentence structure and accuracy. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to improve your score.