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Band 5+: Do you think adverts have a big impact on what people buy?

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Yes, because at work, I have a big impact on people's buying decisions. People tend to want the same things; they only want to have good products. I think this is true for me as well because when I want to buy something, I watch the advert for it and see what people rated. So I think that this is really important. Advertisements are a good influence.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Yes, because at work, I have a big impact on people’s boy because people they have like the same they only want to have a good production and at work. I think that this is like me because when I want to buy something, I will watch the advert of it and watch what people rated. So I think that this is really important. Advert is a good shooting.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

want: 3

because: 2

people: 2

think: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question, but it focuses too much on personal experience. Consider broadening the scope to include more general observations about advertising's influence on consumer behavior. Try to avoid using personal examples as the main support for your argument.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's a slight digression about work impacting buying decisions, which isn't directly relevant to the question. The connection between the speaker's personal experience and the overall impact of adverts could be made more explicit. Smoother transitions between ideas would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "good production" and "good shooting" are imprecise. More sophisticated vocabulary related to advertising and consumer behavior would improve the score. Replacing "advert" with "advertisement" throughout would also enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect word choices ("boy" instead of "buying"), and some awkward phrasing. While the message is generally clear, more accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed. For example, the sentence 'I think that this is like me' is grammatically incorrect and could be rephrased for clarity and accuracy.

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