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Band 6+: Do you think everyone shares a similar definition of happiness

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Actually, I don't think so. The definition of happiness varies from person to person. Some people believe that if they have a huge amount of money or can shop for whatever they want, they are the happiest. On the other hand, for some people, if they can fulfill their basic needs like education, food, and healthcare services, they are the happiest. The definition of happiness is different from individual to individual.

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Actually I don’t think so. The definition of happiness varies person to person. Some person believe this if they got a huge amount of money or can shopping whatever they want. They are happiest person. On the other hand for some people if they can fulfill their basic needs like education, food, health care service, they are the happiest person. Actually the definition of happiness is different from individual to individual.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

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definition: 2

happiness: 2

person: 2

people: 2

happiest: 2

individual: 2

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6.5

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question. Consider exploring the complexities of the concept of happiness further by discussing cultural influences or different philosophical perspectives. While the response is clear, expanding on the reasons behind the varying definitions would strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. Minor repetition is present, but it does not significantly impede understanding. Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and reducing instances of repetition, such as 'happiest person'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and conveys the intended meaning. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the nuances of happiness. For example, instead of 'huge amount of money,' consider 'substantial wealth' or 'considerable financial resources'. The phrase 'shopping whatever they want' could be replaced with something like 'unrestricted access to consumer goods'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the grammar is mostly correct, there are some minor errors. For example, 'Some person believe' should be 'Some people believe'. The sentence structure could be improved for greater grammatical range and accuracy. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical competence.

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