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Band 6+: Do you think hotel work is a good career for life?

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As far as I am concerned, every job has its own aspects and requires certain skills to navigate its processes. The hospitality industry is one of them. You can develop your own business and skills while working there. Also, someone who works in a hotel has the opportunity to encounter luxury, famous people, and individuals from all walks of life, gaining valuable experiences. It is very interesting to me; if I had to choose this job, I would select it just for the chance to see some popular people.

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As far as I am concerned, every work has its own stuff and requires some professions to circulate its own process. The hospitality industry is one of them. You can work on your own business and skills to work on there. Also, someone who works in a hotel has this opportunity to face some luxury and famous people and all walks of life and learn its experience and see them. It is very interesting to me if I had to select this job. I select just for seeing some popular people.

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