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Band 6+: Do you think money can make people to be happy?

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Well, in my view, it depends on people's behavior and their lifestyle. Is it weird? I want to say that on the one hand, for poor people, maybe money is perfect for making them happy. On the other hand, in the world, there are a lot of rich people and wealthy generations. So, I think that money isn't necessary for them, and I believe that money can't make rich people happy.

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Well, in Mayweave it depends on people’s behavior and their lifestyle. And is it weird? I want to say that on the one hand, maybe poor ones, maybe money is so perfect for poor people to make happy. And on the other hand, in the world there are a lot of rich people and rich generation. And so I think that money isn’t necessary for them and I believe that money can’t make rich people happy.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

people: 3

money: 3

happy: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer shows a basic understanding of the topic and attempts to present two sides of the argument. However, the structure is somewhat disorganized, and the expression could be more precise and natural. Consider structuring your response more clearly with a stronger introduction and conclusion. Focus on developing each point more fully with specific examples or explanations to support your claims.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and slightly incoherent phrasing, such as "in Mayweave." The structure is present (considering two sides of the argument), but smoother transitions and a more confident delivery would improve fluency. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently, focusing on clear articulation and reducing filler words like "maybe."

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but lacks precision in places. Words like "perfect" could be replaced with more nuanced vocabulary. Using synonyms for "rich" (e.g., affluent, wealthy) would demonstrate a wider range. Focus on expanding your vocabulary with more sophisticated synonyms and descriptive words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as the sentence structure in the first part. While the message is conveyed, more precise grammar is needed. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, paying attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence construction. Review the use of articles and prepositions.

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