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Band 6+: do you think people feel happier when they are in the park or in coffee shop?

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I would say it definitely depends on the person. Some people feel happy when they can connect with nature, so they can enjoy the fresh air in the park. And others love to sit at a coffee shop, have some coffee, and enjoy the moment with their friends. This can make them feel really satisfied with the service of the cafe. But yeah, it depends, I think.

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I would say it definitely depend on what kind of person, uh, some people feel happy when they can keep in touch with the nature so they can enjoy the fresh air in the park. And um, uh, some other people uh, they love to sit at uh, uh, at the coffee shop or there’some coffee and enjoy the moment with their friends. And it can make them really uh, reallytf uh, satisfaction satisfied with the uh, with the servif of the cafe. But yeah, it’depend on, I think.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

with: 3

depends: 2

enjoy: 2

coffee: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant and addresses the question well. The student provides two contrasting perspectives on happiness in different environments. However, the answer could be more developed by providing specific examples or reasons why people might feel happier in each location. For example, the student could mention the calming effect of nature or the social aspect of coffee shops.

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The answer is generally fluent and coherent. There are some minor hesitations and repetitions, but the student manages to convey their ideas clearly. The use of cohesive devices like 'and' and 'but' helps to connect the different parts of the answer. However, the student could improve their fluency by using more complex sentence structures and avoiding filler words like 'um' and 'uh'.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, including words like 'connect with nature,' 'fresh air,' and 'satisfied.' However, there are some instances of less precise language, such as 'it depends' and 'really satisfied.' The student could expand their vocabulary by using more specific and descriptive words to express their ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, but there are some minor errors. For example, the student uses the incorrect tense in 'it depend' and 'servif.' The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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