Part 3

Band 5+: Do you think staying in a luxury room is a waste of money?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

62% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

I am going with 50-50. Not all people book hotels to consume their minds. Some people book hotels for the relaxation of their mind and body, to taste the food at those hotels, and to relieve stress from their daily lives. They experience luxurious living and shopping. Others enjoy drinks and attend meetings and parties, like weddings and birthdays. This may be a cause of waste of money, but not everyone books hotels to waste their time.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I am going with 50-50 not all people book hotels for consume their mind. Some people book hotel for the relaxation of their mind, their body and taste the food of that hotels and try to stress out for their daily life and experienced about luxurious life, luxurious shopping also and some others are only enjoyed about like drink and some kind of meetings and parties just like wedding, birthday. This may be cause of waste of money but everyone not book hotel for waste their mind.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 31 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotels: 4

their: 4

people: 2

waste: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer presents a balanced perspective on the topic, acknowledging both sides of the argument. However, it could benefit from more in-depth analysis and a clearer articulation of the reasons why staying in a luxury hotel might or might not be considered a waste of money. Expanding on the economic aspects and exploring different perspectives would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable and mostly coherent, but the structure could be improved. The phrasing 'I am going with 50-50' is informal and could be replaced with a more sophisticated expression of uncertainty. Breaking the response into more concise paragraphs would enhance clarity and flow. Consider using transition words to improve the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Words like "consume their mind" are unclear. More precise language would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms for 'luxury' and 'waste' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. The sentence 'This may be cause of waste of money but everyone not book hotel for waste their mind' is grammatically incorrect. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence complexity would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Do you think staying in a luxury room is a waste of money?

I personally feel staying in the luxury hotel is not a waste of money because a good luxurious hotel will have a good star rating which in turn they are going to provide you a premium service with that huge amount of money. At least once in your lifetime you should enjoy those luxurious restaurants […]

Band 7+

Do you think staying in a luxury room is a waste of money?

Well, I think it cannot be judged that staying in a luxury room as a absolutely as a waste of money because it depends on situations. For example, you are very formal and a notable situation. The one luxury room demonstrates the respect and importance of customers which deserve the position and the reputation. However, […]

Band 7+

Do you think staying in a luxury room is a waste of money?

From my perspective, from time to time it is necessary to splash out in such a thing. I mean staying in a five-star hotel room, which is totally luxurious. Although the majority of them costs an arm and a leg, but sometimes we need to spend time in that places to chill out and detach […]

Band 7+

Do you think staying in a luxury room is a waste of money?

In my opinion, I think stay in luxury room is not always tough Monday if they have lot of money will be the run of lot of business Then comfortable in luxury hotel. It’s totally fine some people have a dream they experience they Want to live in the or one day?

Band 5+

See All

In what ways could governments better support the development of sustainable tourism practices?

It all boils down to their ashen. In my opinion, the government has to bid up plenty of high-rise biddings including their cultural heritage by mesmerizing tourists or visitors so that their country is watched by public and media security. On top of that, they have to share a lot of information about their traditional […]

Band 6+

What is right age for a children to learn drawing.

Well, I don’t think so. Learning drawing needs a specific age. I think just like that, when there is no fixed age for a child to start learning drawing, I don’t think so. There is no, there is required a fix age for children to start learning, learning drawing. In my opinion, children can begin […]

Band 7+

Why are there so few top athletes?

While there are several structural and cultural reasons why Vietnam still produce relatively few world-class athletes, first investment in professional training facilities, musicians, sports fans and full-time coaching is still limited compared to countries like China. talented children have to stop because families expect them to focus on the new state entrance exam. The culture […]

Band 7+

How might the role of libraries evolve in the digital age?

That’s a very interesting question. I have never really thought about it before, but in my opinion the role of traditional libraries will reserve in the future because there are several number of individuals who are engaged in books, not digital books that you can… You can bring with you, but there are also a […]

Band 6+

Why do you think celebrations are important in society? Do you think celebrations are experienced differently by the different generations?

I strongly believe that celebrations are placed in an important role in society because we need a more social-label area and environment. Celebrations makes me us more social and related. I think celebrations are experienced differently by the different generations, such as Russian societies are different celebrates. Turkish peoples are different celebrates. Additionally, Z generations […]

Band 6+

To what extent do social media platforms contribute to political polarization?

To be honest, I don’t know much about it, but if I consider why to answer for this question, I would say that I believe social media, which is located on the YouTube platforms, you know that we can receive more information about political opinions or something like that. Yeah, there is many subjects about […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium