Band 5+: Do you think the internet has changed the way people communicate with each other? Why or why not

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly, covering several key changes such as speed, video calls, social media, and a potential drawback. However, it is somewhat general and lacks depth or specific examples. To improve, you could elaborate on each point with more detail, such as mentioning the impact on global communication, the shift from synchronous to asynchronous communication, or the effects on personal relationships. Additionally, ensure the response is fully developed and provides a more comprehensive analysis.

The answer is organized with a clear introduction and a few points, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by unclear phrasing and a lack of cohesive devices. The phrase 'stay in style with friends and family who lose their way' is confusing and breaks coherence. To improve, use clearer transitions (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'In addition') and ensure each idea is fully developed. Practice speaking in a more connected manner with fewer pauses or self-corrections.

The vocabulary is basic and contains errors that affect precision. For example, 'stay in style' should be 'stay in touch', and 'lose their way' should be 'live far away'. The phrase 'media has people connect with order' is unclear and likely intended as 'social media helps people connect with others'. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to communication (e.g., 'instant messaging', 'real-time interaction', 'global connectivity') and practice using words accurately in context.

The grammar is mostly simple and contains several errors. For instance, 'stay in style' is incorrect, 'who lose their way' is grammatically wrong, and 'media has people connect with order' is not a correct structure. There is also a lack of complex sentence structures. To improve, work on using a variety of sentence types (e.g., conditional, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and word choice are accurate. Practice forming more complex sentences to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.