Band 6+: Do you think you have changed as you got older

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and demonstrates some development in the speaker's personality. However, it could benefit from more specific examples and a deeper exploration of the changes. Elaborating on how the school environment influenced the changes and providing concrete examples of personality improvements would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There's some repetition and hesitation ("my my personal"). Smoother transitions between ideas would enhance the response.

Vocabulary is adequate, but more precise language could be used. Instead of "fashion test," using "fashion sense" is more accurate and sophisticated. The phrase "better person" is a bit generic; more specific examples of improvement would strengthen the response.

There are grammatical errors ("I have surrounded by", "my fashion test", repetition of "become"). While the meaning is understandable, more accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed for a higher score. Consider using more complex sentence structures.