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Band 4+: Do you think young people feel the same about shopping at markets as older people? Why is that?

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I think young people and older people will feel differently about shopping. Young people want to see different types of products and they want to buy the expensive items they love. They can find everything in the shop and they won't work in the shop.

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I think people and old people will feel depend from the shopping. People want to see the different types of products and they want to buy the expensive product as they love. They can find all the things in the shop and they won’t work in the shop.

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The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and detailed explanation. Consider expanding on the reasons behind the differences in shopping preferences between age groups, providing more specific examples, and exploring the potential influence of factors such as technology and social trends.

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