Band 6+: Do you think young people today spend too much time on their phones?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response directly addresses the question and provides a relevant opinion. However, the explanation lacks depth and could benefit from more specific examples and a more developed discussion of the potential negative consequences of excessive phone use. Consider exploring the impact on various aspects of life, such as social interaction, academic performance, or physical health.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor hesitations and slightly unnatural phrasing ('except from doing exercise or etc.') are present, but the overall message is clear and easy to follow. Improving the flow with more natural connectors and smoother transitions would enhance fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate, but lacks precision in places. Phrases like 'a good choice for spending time' are somewhat vague. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for 'spend time' and 'use it' to show a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors ('except from' instead of 'aside from', the slightly awkward phrasing of 'Not only relax, but also'). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures (e.g., subordinate clauses, passive voice) would improve grammatical range and accuracy.