Band 4+: Do you use social media? If so, how much time do you spend on it each day?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the question by providing a specific duration and platform, but it deviates significantly from the main topic. While providing context about your daily routine is acceptable, a large portion of the response focuses on school subjects and hobbies rather than expanding on social media usage. To improve, try to stay more closely related to the prompt. For example, you could explain why you use Instagram or how you feel about the amount of time you spend on it, rather than listing your academic subjects.

The answer lacks logical flow and coherence. The speaker jumps between social media, school, and specific subjects without clear transitions or cohesive devices. The sentence structure is fragmented, making it difficult for the listener to follow the relationship between the ideas. To improve, use linking words like 'However,' 'In addition,' or 'Besides that' to connect your thoughts.

The vocabulary is very basic and repetitive (e.g., using 'spent' and 'school' multiple times). There is a lack of precise vocabulary to describe time management or social media usage. Instead of just saying 'watch Instagram,' you could use phrases like 'scroll through my feed' or 'engage with content.' Try to use a wider range of synonyms to avoid repetition.

There are significant grammatical errors that impede communication. The speaker uses the past tense ('spent') when discussing a daily habit, which should be in the present simple tense ('spend'). The sentence 'In one hour I spent' is ungrammatical. You need to work on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of prepositions (e.g., 'spend time *on*' rather than 'spent my time *to*'). Focus on mastering simple present tense for habitual actions.