Band 6+: Has your attitude to free time changed since you were a child?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and demonstrates a clear understanding of the task. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanation of *how* the attitude has changed and what factors contributed to this change. Elaborating on the differences between past and present free time activities and the feelings associated with them would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but there are some fluency issues. The phrase "when I passed away" is jarring and inappropriate in this context. The structure could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. Consider using transitions like 'however', 'in contrast', or 'more recently'.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer conveys the intended meaning, using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'go to a trip,' use 'go on a trip' or 'take a trip'. Consider using synonyms for 'various things' to show a wider range of vocabulary.

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence 'when I passed away I have been familiar...' is grammatically incorrect and nonsensical. The tense is inconsistent. The use of articles is also inconsistent. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures is crucial for a higher score.