Band 6+: Have you ever borrowed money from others

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a simple answer. Consider expanding on the situation by providing more details about the loan, such as the amount, purpose, and repayment plan. Elaborating on your current situation and future plans would also strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight stumble in the middle ('And that's why I borrowed my father's money. But actually if I would work...'), which could be improved by rephrasing. The overall flow is good, though.

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'borrowed' and 'earn' are simple and functional. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'borrowed money', the student could have used 'obtained a loan' or 'received financial assistance'.

There is one grammatical error ('if I would work' should be 'if I were working'). Otherwise, the grammar is mostly accurate, although the sentence structures are relatively simple. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.