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Band 5+: How can parents do with their children to make them happy

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Well, parents can do many things to contribute to their child's happiness, such as giving them presents they really want and encouraging them in their endeavors. For example, if a child is competing in something, parents can offer support and encouragement. And when a child has a difficult time with a test, parents can not only encourage them, but also practice with them to help them improve their performance.

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Well, parents can do many things to contribute to their child stattisf question such as giving them the present that they they are very war and, uh, encourage their child on the competition. And also when the the grandren has a bu point on the test, they can not just encourage, but also practice the testas with them, um, to make better outcome.

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parents: 3

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The student provides some relevant ideas, but they are not fully developed. For example, the idea of giving presents is not explained in detail, and the example of a child competing is not fully elaborated. The student also uses the phrase "grandren" which is not a real word. The student should focus on providing more specific and detailed examples to support their ideas.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and contains some repetition and self-correction. The student also uses fillers such as "uh" and "um." The student should try to speak more fluently and naturally, and avoid using fillers.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some of the words are not used accurately. For example, the student uses "stattisf question" instead of "satisfaction" and "war" instead of "want." The student should pay attention to the accuracy of their vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes some grammatical errors, such as using the wrong tense in "they can not just encourage, but also practice the testas with them." The student should focus on improving their grammatical accuracy.

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