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Band 6+: How can societies better support and integrate refugees and immigrants into their communities?

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I think the good government that supports the integration of immigrants into the local community is their own way to collect love and policy to support. First, home is about connecting with the people. I think local people have their own way to engage with the system and encourage integration to stay and connect with others. Sometimes, people can focus on work or study in the local community or make new friends. I feel this is very necessary and important in our modern society.

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I think the good-grade government that supports the integration of immigrants into the local community is their own way to collect love and policy to support. First home are the closing with the people. And I think the local people own way to empty the system and own way to encourage people integration to stay and to connect with other more. And sometimes it’s have the people can to focus on work study in local community or to collect new friends and sometimes I feel it is very necessary and important in our modern now.

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local: 3

with: 3

people: 3

think: 2

integration: 2

community: 2

their: 2

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