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Band 7+: How can societies better support the mental health and well-being of individuals in increasingly stressful environments?

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I believe that societies can support individuals who struggle with their mental health issues in different ways. First of all, we need to create positive communities that can help each other and are kind. Also, we need to make people aware of the symptoms of these health issues because if we can treat them at the start, it will be much easier.

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I believe that societies can support individuals that struggle with their mental health issues in some different ways. First of all, we need to create positive societies that can help each other, that are kind. Also we need to aware people about symptoms of the health issues because if we can treat it on the start it will be much easier.

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