Band 8+: How do you normally celebrate your birthday now?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is a great response. You've answered the question directly and provided a clear explanation for your current birthday celebrations. The addition of personal context regarding your introversion adds depth and makes the response feel natural.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. The pacing is good. Minor improvements could be made by slightly smoothing out the phrasing in the second sentence. For example, instead of 'bring a cake, celebrate it with...', a more natural phrasing would be 'have a cake with...'

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like "introvert" are used effectively. More sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to elevate the response. For example, instead of 'close friends,' consider using 'intimate circle' or 'a select few friends'.

Grammar is mostly accurate. The tense is consistent. The only minor issue is the slightly awkward phrasing in the second sentence, which could be improved for better flow. The sentence 'I have changed a lot recently and I became an introvert' could be improved to 'I have changed a lot recently and have become an introvert' for better parallelism.