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Band 6+: How do you think technological advancements have changed the concept of privacy in modern society?

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With the development of technology, privacy is becoming one of the major issues in society. People find it really difficult to keep their private lives private because technology makes it challenging. Many people nowadays post their photos on Instagram or Telegram, which contributes to this issue.

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With the development of technology, nowadays privacy is becoming one of them. issues of the society and people find it really difficult to have their private life as a private because technology like gets it really difficult as many people nowadays put their photos or post their photos on Instagram or Telegram that is like

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