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Band 6+: How do you think the increasing reliance on technology affects our ability to form genuine human connections?

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I think the increasing reliance on technology affects our ability to form genuine human connections. It's so powerful because when I miss my mom, I can connect with her. This is about the increasing reliance on technology, as it continues to improve. That's why we have new advancements every year. Also, we had online classes, so we could study online. When I was living in Baku, I could study at a university in the UK because of online classes. I can also take language classes from different countries. That's the effect of technology in our lives. That's why human connection is important. I can communicate with my friends and relatives who are far away from me through technology.

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I think the increasing reliance on technology effects are ability to form genuine human connections. It’s like so powerful because when I miss my mom, I’m just doing first time with her. this that’s about increasing reliance on technology because technology increasingly getting improved so that’s why we got new new steps every year every year and just Also, we had a class online so we can study online like when I was living in Baku, I can study at university in UK because it’s online classes. So I can take some other language classes from different countries. That’s the technology effects in our life. That’s why human connection is the same things. I can communicate with my friends, with my relatives far away from me with some technology reliance.

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technology: 4

that's: 3

online: 3

classes: 3

increasing: 2

reliance: 2

human: 2

because: 2

could: 2

study: 2

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