Band 4+: how do you usually spend your weekends?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant and provides specific activities, but the phrasing 'At times... sometimes... and that's it' sounds a bit unnatural and could be more fluent. Consider using more varied sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

The answer is short and lacks development. There is no clear structure or use of cohesive devices. The phrase 'After the time' is confusing and disrupts coherence. To improve, expand on your activities with more details and use linking words like 'usually', 'sometimes', or 'also'.

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('weekend', 'temple', 'children'). The phrase 'made the children' is incorrect; 'visited' or 'helped' would be better. To improve, use a wider range of words (e.g., 'frequently', 'occasionally', 'volunteer', 'spiritual') and avoid errors.

Several grammatical errors: 'After the time I spent' is incorrect; 'who lives' should be 'who live' (subject-verb agreement); 'that's it' is informal. The sentence structure is simple and lacks variety. To improve, practice using different tenses and complex sentences.