Band 5+: How does social media affect the way people form and maintain relationships?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer addresses the question but focuses too much on a specific negative aspect (deception) rather than discussing the broader effects of social media on relationships. It lacks a general, balanced perspective and does not fully explore how social media affects relationship formation and maintenance. To improve, consider discussing both positive and negative impacts, such as facilitating long-distance connections or enabling constant communication, while also acknowledging potential drawbacks like reduced face-to-face interaction.

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks clear organization and development. There is some repetition and self-correction ('people that who can like lie to you'). The response could benefit from a clearer structure, such as introducing a main point and then providing examples or explanations. To improve, practice outlining your ideas before speaking and use discourse markers like 'firstly', 'moreover', or 'for instance'.

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('people', 'internet', 'lie'). There is an attempt to use more specific language ('oversimplifies', 'reliable'), but overall range is limited. To improve, learn synonyms for common words and practice using topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'deception', 'authenticity', 'digital interactions').

There are several grammatical errors: subject-verb agreement ('people oversimplifies'), incorrect relative pronoun ('people that who'), and awkward phrasing ('introduce yourself to you'). The refined answer corrects these, but the raw answer shows limited grammatical control. To improve, review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement and relative clauses, and practice forming complex sentences accurately.