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Band 6+: How does the beauty industry advertise its products so successfully?

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The beauty industry advertisement often focuses on making the brand famous for its attractive packaging, as well as emphasizing the quality of the product when it is launched in the market. Furthermore, they also create doubt each month, celebrating birthdays and developing products that fit the trends constantly.

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The beauty industry advertisement often focuses on making the brand famous for its attractive packaging as well as focusing on the quality product when allowed to the market. Furthermore, they also make this doubt each month, birthday and creating products that fit the trend constantly.

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question and provides relevant ideas, but it could be more fully developed with clearer explanations and more specific examples. Consider expanding on the mentioned points and exploring additional advertising strategies used by the beauty industry, such as celebrity endorsements, social media campaigns, and aspirational marketing. Ensure a smooth flow and logical connection between ideas.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is mostly coherent, but the phrasing "create doubt each month" is unclear and disrupts the flow. Try to express ideas more directly and ensure smooth transitions between points. Consider using discourse markers like 'for instance' or 'in addition' to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. 'Attractive packaging' and 'quality product' are generic terms. Try to use more specific vocabulary related to the beauty industry, such as 'innovative formulas,' 'sleek design,' or 'premium ingredients.' Replacing 'make this doubt' with a clearer phrase would also improve lexical resource.

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There are some grammatical errors, such as 'when allowed to the market' and 'make this doubt.' The sentence structure is also relatively simple. Work on using more complex sentence structures and ensure correct preposition usage. For example, 'when it is launched in the market' is a better construction. Also, review the use of articles ('a,' 'an,' 'the').

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