Part 3

Band 5+: How does unemployement affect people's mentall well-being and lifestyle

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As I mentioned earlier, the people who don't have any work to do are really absurd. They will spend most of their time just lying in their room, watching TV or chatting with their friends. These types of people don't have any benefit to society, to the country, or even to their family. This kind of lifestyle will lead them to become unhealthy in a short time.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

As I mentioned earlier, the people who doesn’t have any work to do are really really absurd. They will spend most of their time just lying at their room and watching TV or speaking, chatting with their friends. This kind of, these types of people are, doesn’t have any benefit to the social, to the country, even to their family. And this is kind of lifestyle they will be, they will get unhealthy in a quick time.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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people: 2

don't: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, consider elaborating on the psychological effects of unemployment, such as stress, anxiety, and depression, and how these can impact daily routines, social interactions, and overall lifestyle choices. Providing a more balanced perspective, acknowledging potential positive coping mechanisms, and offering a broader range of consequences would strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('really really,' 'this kind of, these types of people are'). The organization of ideas is basic. To improve, try to structure your answer more clearly, perhaps by outlining the main points you want to make before you start speaking. Practice speaking more smoothly by focusing on reducing filler words and pauses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is simple and somewhat limited. Words like 'absurd' are used, but the overall range is not very broad. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of unemployment and mental well-being. For example, instead of 'doesn't have any benefit,' you could use 'contributes negligibly' or 'offers limited value.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'the people who doesn't have' (should be 'the people who don't have') and incorrect verb conjugations. The sentence structure is also quite simple. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in basic grammar. Practice constructing more complex sentences and review basic grammar rules.

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