Band 5+: How has technology changed the way people communicate?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more detailed explanations of how technology has influenced communication methods and their impact on social interactions. Focus on general trends rather than personal experiences. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and repetitions ('people's people'). The structure is simple. To improve, try to expand on your points and use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas together more smoothly.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. While 'comfortable' is relevant, the range is limited. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to communication technology, such as 'instant messaging,' 'video conferencing,' or 'social media platforms.'

The grammar contains errors ('phone phone,' 'talking people's people'). The sentence structure is simple. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in basic grammar.