Band 4+: How has technology changed the way people communicate

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer attempts to address the question by stating that technology has changed communication, but it lacks a clear, structured response. The example provided is vague and not fully developed, and the answer drifts into a personal anecdote without clearly linking it to the broader impact of technology on communication. To improve, focus on providing a general overview of how technology has transformed communication (e.g., speed, reach, modes), and then support it with specific, well-explained examples. Ensure the response is coherent and directly answers the question without unnecessary digressions.

The answer lacks clear organization and coherence. The response starts with a direct answer but then becomes confusing and disjointed. There is no clear progression of ideas, and the example about meeting someone in a game is not clearly connected to the question. The answer ends abruptly without a conclusion. To improve, structure your answer with a clear introduction, a developed example, and a concluding thought. Use cohesive devices to link ideas, and avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

The vocabulary is limited and imprecise. Phrases like 'the same way as you can support you' and 'getting rid of you' are unclear and not used accurately. There is little range of vocabulary, and the answer lacks precision. To improve, expand your vocabulary to include more precise and varied terms related to communication and technology. Practice using collocations and idiomatic expressions appropriately.

There are several grammatical errors and the sentence structures are often incomplete or incorrect. For example, 'when you meeting someone' should be 'when you meet someone', and 'he or she wouldn't even ask you what happened, how it's getting that wars' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The answer also lacks a full range of structures, relying on simple and repetitive patterns. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.