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Band 7+: How might changes in family structures affect the way children are raised and socialized in the future?

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So I would say that changes in family structures have a considerable impact on the social and emotional development of children, because how you behave, how our family structure is, and how parents and relatives talk can affect the future of the child. Children learn from their experiences and what they see. That's why it can have a big impact on their overall development. For example, I would say divorce can be a challenging thing for the child, because when their parents are divorced, they don't know how to express their emotions, and it can be very difficult for them. Thank you.

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So I would say that changes in family structures have a considerable impact on the social and emotional development of children, because how you behave, how our family structure it, how parents even relative talk can affect the future of the child. because children learn from the experience from what they see. That’s why it can have a big impact on their development overall. So, for example, I would say divorce can be a challenging thing for the child, because when their parents are divorced, they don’t know how to express their emotions around them, and it can be very struggling for them. Thank you.

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family: 2

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development: 2

children: 2

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parents: 2

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