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Band 7+: How might the education system be reformed to better prepare students for the challenges of the future workforce?

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In my personal opinion, I think that it would be better if school teachers prepared us for the modern workplace. For example, it would be great if they taught us how to work with Excel because these kinds of skills are really valuable in the workplace. Second, it would be really great if they taught us how to work with technology because nowadays technology is improving day by day, and I think that the younger generation should know how to use all of it.

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In my personal opinion, I think that it would be better if as school teachers prepare us to the modern workplaces For example, it would be great if they teach us how to work with Excel because these kind of skills is really valuable at the workplaces Second, it would be really great if they just teaches how to work with technology because nowadays technology has been improving day by day even though and I think that the young generation should know how to use all of them.

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would: 3

think: 2

workplace: 2

great: 2

taught: 2

because: 2

really: 2

technology: 2

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