Band 6+: How might the increasing automation of jobs impact the education system?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, elaborate on the potential impacts of automation on education, providing more detailed reasoning and examples to support your points. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are hesitations ('very... Would it be very difficult') that disrupt the flow. Using discourse markers like 'furthermore' or 'in addition' could improve coherence. Try to avoid starting sentences and then restarting them.

The vocabulary is basic ('AI things,' 'can't think about things'). Expanding vocabulary related to education and technology would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'can't think about things,' use 'lack critical thinking skills.'

There are grammatical errors ('the most people use automation'). Correct this to 'most people use automation.' The sentence structure is simple. Try to incorporate more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range.