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Band 6+: How might the increasing reliance on technology impact our ability to form meaningful relationships?

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Actually, we are really dependent on technology. It is the technology, the wonderful thing of modern science. We cannot survive or communicate without technology. If you want to talk with someone, you need to use technology. It is also easy to use, and I do not need much time to talk with someone. I can communicate with others and share videos very easily. As a result, our relationships will increase. It is helpful to make friends both online and offline. There are a lot of video-sharing apps that are really helpful, as technology like computers and mobile phones will also help us to improve our relationships. We are really dependent on it, and it is very helpful in our personal lives.

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Actually we are really depend on technology. It is the technology, the wonderful thing of modern science. We cannot survive or talk without technology. If you want to talk with someone, you need to use technology. It is also easy to use and I do not need a use time to talk with someone. I can communicate with others and video sharing very easily. As a result our relationship will increase. It is helpful to make friends from online and offline. There are a lot of video sharing apps that are really helpful as the technology like computer and mobile phone will also help us to improve our relationship. We can really, we are really depend on it and it is very helpful in our personal life.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

technology: 5

really: 3

with: 3

helpful: 3

dependent: 2

communicate: 2

someone: 2

relationships: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the topic but lacks depth and exploration of potential negative impacts. It primarily focuses on the positive aspects of technology in facilitating communication, without fully considering the nuances of forming meaningful relationships. To improve, consider discussing both the advantages and disadvantages, and provide more specific examples to support your points.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are instances of repetition ('really') and a lack of smooth transitions between ideas. To improve, focus on using varied sentence structures and cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'in contrast') to link your ideas more effectively. Try to avoid repeating the same words or phrases too frequently.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The language used is quite basic. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to technology and relationships. For example, instead of 'helpful,' you could use 'instrumental,' 'beneficial,' or 'advantageous.' Also, explore synonyms for common words like 'talk' and 'use.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some accuracy issues. For example, 'I do not need a use time' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., complex sentences, conditional clauses) and ensure accuracy in your sentence construction. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing more complex sentences.

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