Band 6+: How might the rise of remote work influence urban planning and the design of cities?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question directly. It provides a clear opinion and a specific reason (shift from office-based to accommodation-based). However, it could be more fully developed by discussing specific aspects of city design (e.g., transportation, public spaces) and by maintaining a general perspective rather than using personal language like 'I think' repeatedly. To improve, consider elaborating on how urban planning might adapt and using more formal, general expressions.

The answer is generally coherent but contains hesitations ('Well actually', 'you know like') and some repetition ('like'). The ideas are connected but could be more logically developed. To improve, reduce filler words and use clearer linking phrases.

Vocabulary is adequate but limited. Phrases like 'shift from office-based cities to more accommodation-based houses' are functional but not precise. Consider using more specific terms such as 'residential zones' or 'mixed-use developments'.

Grammar is mostly accurate but contains minor errors: 'as people started to less commute' should be 'as people started to commute less'; 'the cities will change' could be 'cities will change'. Sentence structures are simple. Use more complex structures like conditionals or relative clauses.